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growing up, heartbreak, longing, loss, moon, poetry, scars, sun, sunset, waiting and longing, wax and wane
I’ve seen your face,
a thousand times,
it’s like the setting sun.
I’ve called your name,
have you called mine?
I rise and you are gone.
We are so different,
you and I,
you’re up when I am down.
You call, I run,
but where are you,
when I need a friend around?
You are the sun,
cowardly cold,
remote, aloof, and chilling.
You’ve hid in shadows,
all of my life,
acknowledgement unwilling.
I am the moon,
with passions bright,
your fire sears scars anew.
You wax and wane,
and spin my world,
‘til I don’t know what to do.
I’ve seen your face,
a thousand times,
you’re fire and I am ice.
You’ve broke my heart,
so many times –
Let go – I’ve paid the price.
© Sun and Moon 2012
By Alexandra Carr-Malcolm
English: The Sun directly opposite to the moon as seen on 10 Sep 2011 (One day before the full moon day). Place: Mount St Helens, WA USA. This exemplifies that on a full moon day the earth is between the Sun and the Moon. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
Love this!
Thank you!
This one has been a major thorn in my side – phew I’m glad it’s out!!!
🙂
Amazing one 🙂
Keep it up!
Blessings,
-Naima.
Aw thank you Naima – feel like I’ve run a marathon, sweating over this one!!!
Hahahaha 🙂
You did a splendid job!
Happy Writing.
-Naima.
Love the twist – the cold sun, and hot moon, and then the way you play with that.
Thank you – I’m glad it came across. I was worried people would think I was merely confused with my suns and moons!! 🙂
well this is just lovely:))))
Thank you – this is an old one that has been rattling around for ages – the relief of finishing it can be compared to having a problematic wisdom tooth extracted – relief!!
Hey Rahul,
I have nominated you for “THE COMMENTATOR” award. Thank you for yoru support, I cherish it.
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Congratulations!
-Naima.
Wowee thank you Naima! I’m thrilled 😀
xxx
Awwww… Do you know, I love your expressions!!
You are too great!!! 🙂
-Naima.
It takes a great person to know a great person 😀
❤
Love you loads ❤
-Naima.
Oppsiee.. Sorry about the name Worldly winds..
-Naima
Hehe that’s fine – a very fine name it is too 🙂
This is a wonderful poem. Beautiful.
Aw – thank you 🙂
So beautiful
Thank you so much – thank you for ‘finding’ my blog and taking the time to read and comment 🙂
Alex