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Alexandra Carr-Malcolm, death, dreams, dying, fear, hell, insomnia, pain, poetry, sleep, sorrow, soul, UK poet, Yorkshire poet
Slowly, slowly, creeps the dawn,
with monstrous shapes,
and shifting form,
‘tween death and sleep,
my soul doeth lie,
this never world,
where hope does die.
Alas my sense,
it leaves me cold,
splintered spine,
as I’ve grown old
and weary of
this mortal world,
a waiting hell,
backdrop
unfurled.
The antidote
to death
is sleep –
where
Daemons
sneer, and
angels
weep.
© Hades 02.05.2013
by Alexandra Carr-Malcolm
Hades. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
Simply beautiful! Thanks!
Aw thank you – you always leave me such beautiful and positive comments – I really appreciate it – thanks 🙂
I am not one to like all poetry I read (unfortunately) but this one just spoke to me in its quality… its word choice and much more…
Thank you again 🙂
You are very inspirational 🙂
Love it 🙂
Aw thanks – I wrote this on whilst in chilly Wales 🙂
wow… very evoking and much was said in the fewest words possible… can almost feel the heat of hades from here… superb!
Ooh thank you for the kind words 🙂
I enjoyed this poem very much.
Aw thanks – and thank you for your positive and inspiring comments – I always look forward to receiving them from you !! 🙂
I’m glad.
Don’t wanna go there. The picture you paint is entirely too vivid…
Thank you – yes you wouldn’t want a one way ticket there!
Reblogged this on Worldly Winds.