I do not like this place.
I don’t belong here,
the stench of death pervades,
yet outside the sun beats down,
hotter than the promised hell.
I do not like this place.
Relics of a bygone day,
guilt and blame pave the way,
to salvation,
but only if you are too weak.
Enough, to believe as
fear holds tight,
demanding allegiance,
to blame and sin;
dragged screaming from within,
without compassion,
or mercy,
for the weak –
End.
I do not like this place,
I do not belong here,
for the stench of death,
offends my soul.
© I do not belong here 2012
By Alexandra Carr-Malcolm
Beautiful
Thank you very much!! 🙂
“I do not like this place,
I do not belong here,
for the stench of death,
offends my soul.”
These lines say it all! Loved it!!
Blessings,
-Naima.
Thank you Naima 🙂
You’re welcome Alex 🙂
-Naima.
no…you do not belong there….not at all…strong writing
Thank you – I escaped pretty sharpish!! ———-> 🙂
Powerful writing.
Thank you – I hope it was writing and not ranting 🙂
Nice word play ‘… weak / End.’ love it – powerful writing Alex – just the sort of stuff I love. Great image too.
Ah thanks Polly – I thought I had been subtle enough that no one would pick up on that word play 🙂
thank you for spotting it 🙂
Powerful and moving
Thank you very much 🙂
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strong poem and powerful written , Alex.
Thank you Francina 🙂