In dawns half-light,
half-dreams are born.
Half-shadow is where,
half-ideas start to form;
plucked from my mind,
they dance in my soul,
to blossom then flourish,
and make me feel whole.
Some like a sunset,
vibrant colours shout out,
others shy rainbows,
conditions coaxed out.
The hardest of all –
a verse like a thorn,
agitation and pain,
deliverance when drawn.
Β© Half-light 2012
By Alexandra Carr-Malcolm
Rose (Photo credit: MartenKL)
brilliant
I think the tough poem is more like a verruca, but I couldn’t think of anything to rhyme….!!!
Thank you π
‘a verse like a thorn’…lovely
Aw thank you!
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a ripe garden of metaphors:))) wonderful
Thank you very much indeed π
Exquisite! Love it! π
Thank you so much π
Hi Alex,
I have put a link to your blog on my blog
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Aw thank you so much ))blush((
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Very very good Alex
Aw thank you Wendy – this poem was actually one of the thorns that has been bugging me for ages! π
it is beautiful.
the sense of fluidity in your writing, makes it even more so π
Oh thank you so much – this one has been bubbling under the surface for some time now π
Beautiful Poetry π
Any ways, I have nominated ya for βTHE BEAUTIFUL BLOGGERβ, please check it out.
http://thesubterraneanworld.wordpress.com/2012/05/21/beautiful-blogger-award/
Love,
Naima.
Oh thank you Naima!
What a lovely surprise and thank you so much for your kind words π
and congratulations on receiving it yourself too!
Keep writing π
Thank you so very much π
Your likes and humble words are far more than any award, keep loving me and my blog, I am blessed π
Love,
Naima.
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