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Alexandra Carr-Malcolm, anger, bruises, death, domestic abuse, domestic violence, dreams, heartbreak, loss, marriage, poetry, UK poet, violets, Yorkshire poet
His pint glass half empty,
he’s nursing the blues;
always bitter, never mild,
flat cap and scuffed shoes.
She hoovers the house,
with stars in her hair,
sings to her muse,
thanks god he’s not there.
As he sits in the pub,
nursing his woes,
the footy is lost,
as the last whistle blows.
In her Primarni dress,
she scrubs hard the floor,
heart in her mouth,
dreads the key in the door.
He shuffles on home,
with her heart in his boots,
a belly of beer,
and a loin full of fruit.
She accepts his gift,
with the grace of a Queen,
a necklace of violets,
blacks, blues, and greens.
He broods and he dreams,
cultivating his grudge;
she’s stolen his youth,
this old, plain, drudge.
She lies stock-still
as the stars in the air.
He can no longer hurt,
what is no longer there.
© Violets 27.03.2013
by Alexandra Carr-Malcolm
English: Violets by the coast path This year seems to have been particularly good for violets. This is part of a bank also scattered with lesser celandine. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
very well written
Thank you very much 🙂
Sad, but beautiful…among the self sown
Thank you – yes it is sad 🙂
Wow, that will stay with me. Powerful image of emptiness. (love violets). -Jennifer
Thanks Jennifer – I think this kind of emptiness is around us more than we realise 🙂
Very well done, sad but written in a delightful way about love dying, alcohol and abuse.
Thank you very much 🙂
That is amazing!!
Thanks Resa – I’m glad you liked it – it seems my darker side is out to play for the moment!
so very sad…. good job bringing out the emotions 🙂
Thank you so much – I’m glad it conveys well 🙂
Wow – crying.
Thank you – I’m never quite sure how to feel when someone cries from my poems – part of me is delighted that the sadness and futility has shone through, and then the other part feels guilty for making you cry!! So thank you and sorry!!! 🙂
Don’t feel guilty for making others feel with your poems. You moved me. That is why I read it. I had a choice. You did not hurt me. I appreciate and revel in feeling. That is the beauty of being a writer.
Ah thank you for your kind words 🙂
Grannyscolorful is ‘me’, too! :))) Gloria/Granny Gee
Hahaha Hello!!! Thanks for the visit Gloria, I’m now up to 20,008 😀
Pretty good. This blog nearly didn’t get off the ground as I thought – Nobody is interested in poetry – (happily) how wrong I was!
xxxxx
Everyone loves poetry! I do, too. You have a lot of visitors! :))))
Yes and I am stunned by how many people have returned again and again!! 🙂
Isn’t it just wonderful?!!! I will be one of them, too!!!
Thank you 🙂 Oh I must tell you – I am reading your book (When she’s good) on my Kindle and I was nearly late for work today because I was so engrossed and couldn’t put it down!
Wow!!! I’m so honored! You made me smile… thank you for telling me! I am writing book 2 to go with that… and want to keep on writing about Victoria Fairchild.
I am going to get your book this week! I hope you will send me an autograph!!! :)))))
Aw thanks Gloria – message me your full address and I will happily send you something in the post! 🙂
Oh I like the sound of a book 2! I’m just at the old lady with a plaster cast 🙂
Okay!!! :)))
What do you think of Mia… and her medicine?!!!
Just finished it 🙂
Wow!! explosive stuff!! I secretly wonder what Chip gets up to on his voyages away from home – maybe he has a secret room too, or an isolated cabin! You have my imagination working overtime!!
Thank you – I really enjoyed reading!
🙂
:)))
Certainly, I recognize this….
By the time that I got up enough courage to leave, I almost didn’t have enough self-esteem to leave.
But somehow I did.
And little by little, I grew stronger.
I survived….with flying colors.
Bravo – good for you! I’m glad you managed to get out – many people don’t 🙂