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Alexandra Carr-Malcolm, Chanel, death, dreams, haunted, memories, Mother, nightime, poetry, UK poet, Yorkshire poet
This is the final piece from the poetry workshop. The final piece was inspired by Maitreyabandhu’s ‘The Bond’
The idea was to give a feel of anticipation of an impending visit, and use Maitreyabandhu’s closing phrase of, ‘Just the air’, within the poem.
Just the Air
All is still…
and I am present,
caught between two worlds,
just the air as our witness,
and a pillow of dreams
as darkest night unfurls.
I smell your sickly lily scent,
of cigarettes and light Chanel.
Why do you come?
What do you want?
Forgiveness or
remembrance,
from your little girl?
You left in anger
not once, but twice.
So why return
in darkest night,
when youβve been gone,
these eight years long?
Β© Just the Air 22.03.2013
by Alexandra Carr-Malcolm
English: Moon (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
Fabulous poem, Alexandra Carr a great poet.Thank you so much for the visit and liking few of my posts.l follow your blog because l enjoy reading your posts. Have a beautiful weekend.jalal
Thank you so much π
I enjoy following all the blogs – there are lots of creative, talented and interesting posts to read π
Brilliant Alex. I can smell and feel it too!
Thanks Wendy – I’m glad it came across π
Gripping, riveting and heartfelt…Bravo!!
Oh – thank you so much – I’m glad you felt it π
Poignant and haunting poem, excellent done , Alexandra.
groetjes, Francina
Thank you very much Francina. I’m glad I managed to convey the atmosphere π
Alex
Touching with a twist – I love it. Lovely phraseology and tone. Very well done.
Thank you very much for your positive and encouraging comment – I really appreciate your input π
Alex
Nice wording.
Thank you π
Reblogged this on Worldly Winds.