Why am I so invisible?
you do not seem to see,
all the things I do for you,
I always meet your needs.
I know that when I talk to you,
I may as well be dead,
you do not hear a single thing,
that I have bloody said!
Is it that you do not care?
I find it hard to conceive,
that anything I mention,
you simply don’t believe.
We really aren’t compatible,
I know without a doubt,
one day I’ll take my boring self,
and get the hell right out!
Until that day I’m stuck with you,
and all your childish ways,
I’ll spread my wings and fly away,
(I’m marking off the days!)
© Stuck with you 28.11.2012
By Alexandra Carr-Malcolm
Bluestar Ink October 2012 Desktop Calendar (Photo credit: emily.bluestar)
many people will understand this poem
Oh yes – I think so too!! 🙂
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I’d like to change, ‘and all MY childish ways.’
’cause I feel that way these days 🙂
Go right ahead – feel free to change 😀
Awesome expressions! 🙂
Rahul
Thank you Rahul – very kind of you to say 😀
Relate able feelings. Excellent.
Thank you! 🙂
Love your mix of dire frustration and humour. What else can one bring to this situation but humour!
Indeed – I think we’ve all been there – heat of the moment!!
Loved this
Thank you very much indeed 🙂
heh-heh ~ I feel for you 🙂
Like they say – it’s not easy being me 😀
Are you packing???? That persons stuff I mean. Time for THEM to leave???
This poem is strong & clear!
Haha – I think I’ve calmed down now 🙂 Thank you for visiting and leaving me a comment 😀
Alex 🙂
Nice picture, looks like my granny. I love the poem, it’s so clear: the Stuck on you must be over 🙂
Thanks for following my blog. You have a beautiful blog with great poems’. Love to read more about it 🙂
Oh thank you very much indeed! 🙂
How true…
Could be why I am in my element living alone these days.
I am envious 😀