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ageing, Alexandra Carr-Malcolm, death, grief, longing, loss, memories, poetry, remembrance, time, UK poet, Yorkshire poet
Tick tock, tick tock,
my mother’s watch,
upon my arm,
tick tock, tick tock.
It shouldn’t be here,
it should be there,
I have her face,
I have her hair,
tick tock, tick tock.
The time flies by,
I grieve each day,
bequeathed to me,
time slips away,
tick tock, tick tock.
I smell the strap,
for scent of her,
but ‘tis long gone,
no trace is there,
tick tock, tick tock.
Our hands the same,
as time moves on,
just memories,
her voice is gone,
tick tock, tick tock.
The days slide by,
my treasured piece,
reminds of times,
and death’s release,
tick tock, tick tock.
Each tick from you,
I further slip,
each tock to you,
a step I skip,
tick tock, tick tock.
Tick tock, tick tock,
my mother’s watch,
upon my arm,
tick tock, tick tock.
© Mother’s Watch 07.02.2013
by Alexandra Carr-Malcolm
Britannic Ladies Watch Bracelet Ad, 1922 (Photo credit: DominusVobiscum)
This is a very beautiful poem Alex. Coincidentally I am playing with an Heirlooms poem right now! Great minds and all that…
Thank you Wendy – we must be on the same psychic poetic waveband! It often happens to me too!! Look forward to reading yours 🙂
Very touching. Reminds me of one of my mother’s watches I used to wear back in school 🙂
Thank you – it is amazing the memories and object can bring 🙂
A beautiful piece
Thank you 🙂
Lovely, the repetition is hypnotic, allowing the images and thoughts to be planted. A super, evocative piece.
Aw thank you very much indeed, I’m really pleased you appreciated it 🙂
This is beautiful.
Thank you so much – I really like this one too 🙂
You should be proud. 🙂
Oh thank you so much 😀
a nice thing to wear her watch and being reminded of her as time ticks on…loved esp. the part where you smell, searching for her scent on the strap..
Thank you Claudia – it is strange the fragile threads we cling to 🙂
really a moving piece…the watch a constant reminder of her and seeing her in yourself is a cool thing as well the tick of the clock as well made me think of how precious our time is…
Thank you Brian – so precious and so fragile 🙂
The constant tick-tock speaks so eloquently of the passage of time – that it is your mother’s watch making the noise is a constant reminder of her absence. This is a beautiful poem, full of poignant lines and images.
Thank you Tony 🙂
Time is truly unstoppable. A beautiful poem.
Thank you very much indeed. Yes – time marches on…
Alex
🙂
i read it also that your mother is watching, mother’s watch. so hard to miss your mother.
Oh Wow – yes I’d not thought of it that way! That is a very interesting facet to the poem – thank you for pointing it out! Yes, eight years on and I still miss her daily 🙂
Thanks for reading and leaving me that very insightful observation!
Alex 🙂
Reblogged this on Worldly Winds and commented:
For mother’s day ❤
Very beautiful poem, Alex.
Thank you Francina 🙂
Very touching. Very sweet.
Thank you Mary 🙂