You take my heart and rip it out
you stamp it in the ground,
then toss it in the gutter
where it cannot be found.
You savage, you shred it,
until you see the blood.
You cast it off and kill it
and grind it in the mud.
I pick it up and wrap it,
I’ll take it home to keep,
for I will not be needing it,
I’ll bury it and weep.
My poor heart it is broken
You’ve left it all in tatters.
You walk away and leave it,
To you it doesn’t matter.
© Broken Heart 2012
By Alexandra Carr-Malcolm
Black Heart (Photo credit: kreg.steppe)
Beautiful rhythmn and so devastating
Thank you – does it spoil the image to say I was devastating my way through a packet of cookies as I wrote this! 🙂
Nice poem, Alex.
Hearts were not meant to be broken;
though they may be mended, if ever they break.
Have a nice day!
😉
Ah – thank you 🙂
Nicely penned, Alex!
Thank you Rebel – glad you liked it.
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I love this, so emotional and what a tear-jerker. Powerful.
Aw thank you 🙂
It was a sad on when I originally wrote it, though when I uploaded it I was munching cookies – comfort food 🙂
*sniff sniff* that is so very sad!
Oh sorry Mr Rumpy <——- passes the tissues!
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Nicely written, but so sad.
Thank you – I feel a bit mean making people sad!!!
I’m glad you appreciated it 🙂
Ouch!
Ouch indeed!
Thank you for taking the time to visit and leave a comment 🙂
I love this – makes me feel sad. Glad you cheered up with some cookies though!
Aw thank you!
Thoroughly enjoying reading your work too!
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