He said he liked my shoes
sitting across from me
after he said we haven't talked in a while.
I want to tell him everything
as I laugh at his ridiculous beard
then I tell him it's the middle of summer.
When we make plans for tomorrow
my heart and my lips smile
then he looks sad, he forgot he has to work tomorrow.
Oh I love this poem!!
Very nice!
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I loooove your poem! I have sent it on to several of my friends asking them to take a look, and saying I wished I had written that one – it is excellent in its sensitivity, gentleness, longing, poignancy – I could go on!!
Fabulous poem – Love it!!
Thank you so much.